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Remember when the doe stood still

As roasted pig pervaded air,  

As hunters went in for the kill.



Before the fires, before the thrill,

Before the noise, before the blare,

Remember when the doe stood still.



The shredding leaves produced no shrill.

She craned her neck, she gave a stare,

As hunters went in for the kill.



Remember when they scaled the hill

And saw a deer who met their glare.

Remember when the doe stood still.



She saw them there and met their will.

The lightning clapped (she didn't care)

As hunters went in for the kill.



The thunder rumbled Russellville.

She gave no sound, she took the flare.

Remember when the doe stood still,

As hunters went in for the kill.

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:iconangelichope:
This is beautifully written, and it's cool that one could interpret this in many ways!:):):):)
Very nice one!!!:heart::heart::heart::heart:
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~EclipseMind Nov 27, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
I remember. I was the tree.
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~KillerVerse Nov 26, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
I think this is your best poem yet.
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*ArachnoWolf Nov 26, 2012   Traditional Artist
Makes me think of many things...or maybe that's just the chaos in my head :|
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